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Been counting down the weeks
From a six pack bought down the road
Trying to avoid the calendar
Feeling that all time has slowed

I just want to fly back home today
And be able to be myself
Not have to play the peace keeper
Put all their shit on the shelf

Oh to touch down at the airport
And jump up into the car
Although its not too long to go
It still seems so very far


-There's just one thing I have to fear
When I head home and leave from here
All my shit I left at the door
Will it still be there or will there be more
Can I walk past and not give a fuck
Is that to much to ask of luck
The deeper the love the bigger the scar
No matter how much I've stayed afar-


Tomorrow's the last bottle
Perched upon the fridge
To maybe chase some whiskey
But only just a smidge

Been holding onto my tether
Even though it's really frayed
I've just gotta keep thinking
It's the last Lucozade

Just keep counting down
Just keep counting down
Just keep counting down
To the last Lucozade
I feel like it's been a while since I wrote something (probably untrue) so made this up while listening to some utter yobbos kicking off outside my window till 2 am *sigh*

I never know wether or not to write the meaning of this or give an explaination- its not english lit after all, and all art is subjective (if you could call this art)

I guess I'll just say my good friend :iconmeanbreeddave: challenged me to write some "song lyrics" - and this is what he's getting. (See this is why youre the artist and I'm the muse!)

Anyways
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MeanbreedDave Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Honestly tho, I was expecting a comedy lyric but instead you pull off this amazing piece of sad yet super creative piece of poetry- fucking amazing. TO LUCOZADE!
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Partner-in-crime Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
Lucozade- king of the soft drinks :bow:
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MeanbreedDave Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
YASSSSS
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The feeling of leaving home and not only fearing what we'll face while we're out but also what we'll find when we return...
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Partner-in-crime Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
Most defiantly
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